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PostSubject: Alexio Kanelli   Alexio Kanelli EmptySat Jun 22, 2019 1:40 am

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Alexio Kanelli Rsz_ge10
Full Name: Alexio Kanelli
Age: 29
Date of birth: June 21st, 1997
Birthplace: Sparta, Greece
Current home: Athens, Greece
Languages: Greek, English, and German
Blood Status: Muggle-born
Sexual Alignment: Heterosexual
Wand type: 10" applewood with a jackalope horn core.

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Hair colour and style: Short, black, and perpetually messy contrasting with a well-mantained beard of similiar color.
Eye colour: Black
Height: 5'10"
Body type: Athletic and statuesque in the classical sense.
Fashion sense: Professional, meaning suits, dress robes, and a weakness for well-made shoes.
Birthmarks: ---
Tattoos:
Scars: ---
Piercings: ---

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Likes:
 - Theater, Alexio has always had a soft spot for the art form. Introduced to it at a young age by his father, the man has never looked back as he enjoys both participating in theater productions both as an actor and an audience member.
 - Alcohol, though not in the way one might imagine. Rather than spend his nights drinking himself into a stupor, he prides himself on having a more refined taste. Wine, in particular, is something he has a weakness for due growing up in a vineyard.
 - Physical exertion has always been an outlet the stresses of life for Alexio. Running, swimming, and the odd foray into boxing leave the man in incredible shape both physically and mentally.
- Politics, Alexio takes to the office politics of the Greek ministry like a fish to water. He revels in playing 'the game' to advance his career.
- Dueling, magical or otherwise, Alexio loves a good fight and, though he does not necessarily go looking for them, they tend to find him thanks to his line of work.

Dislikes:
 - Cold weather, it has never agreed with him and he doubts it ever will.
 - Chaos, it ruins everything. People die, plans fall apart, and the fabric of society begins to tear when one enters a state of chaos. Nothing good comes of it.
 - Entitlement, Alexio was raised to value equity and, as such, despises those who think themselves better than those around them.

Strengths:
 - Elemental magic, fire, earth, wind, and water all bend to Alexio's will with ease as a result of his early schooling. He especially favors fire-based magic and has begun to dabble in harnessing the power of the gods, lightning.
 - Diplomacy and deception, for Alexio the two strengths go hand in hand as one supports the other. Indeed, had he attended Hogwarts he would have surely been a Slytherin.
 - Methodical, situations are not meant to be jumped into blindly. Rather, the man does his research and attacks each problem he encounters one step at a time.
- Apparition-based combat, if apparition is like driving a car, then Alexio is like a professional driver as a result of his time dueling in the States. He weaves the ability to move from location to location into his combat forms effortless thanks to his keen mind, quick wit, and excellent physical stamina maintained by his aforementioned like of physical exertion.

Weaknesses:
 - Potion Making, it has never been his strong suit. For some reason, whatever he tries to brew either burns or boils over.
 - Cooking, if he lacked an affinity for potions making, then his cooking is even more hopeless. As a result, he can often be seen eating takeout or visiting restaurants for meals.
 - Academic Acumen, never the strongest student in the classroom, Alexio thrived in the more informal learning situations instead.

Positive traits:
 - Confident, whatever decision the man makes he sticks with it even if it might not be the best course of action.
 - Perceptive, one does not become a Greek auror without being able to see and infer more than the average person and Alexio does just that.
 - Passionate, Alexio believes strongly in the causes he joins with and will defend them as best he can.

Negative traits:
 - Unyielding in combat, once engaged in combat, Alexio does not relent to the point of cruelty. Like a bull seeing red, he does not yield until either his opponent is beaten or he is.  
 - Obsessive, once he's sunk his teeth into something, Alexio will not let it go, for better or for worse.
 - Vengeful, suffice to say that if one were to wrong Alexio, the man would balance the books one way or another.

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Born and raised on a vineyard just outside of Sparta, Greece, Alexio Kanelli lived a charmed upbringing. Both parents loved him dearly and did the best they could by him. However, around his fifth birthday, they began to notice strange happenings centered around their son. Objects would move towards him inexplicitly, rain curved around him at times as if to avoid his body, and when helping in the vineyard the plants he cared for always seemed to grow just a bit better than all the rest. It took the guidance of an elderly neighbor to reveal that Alexio had magical potential.

Despite his potential, and not entirely understanding the ramifications of it, both his parents raised him like any other child. He attended this school, made friends, and had fun—normal kid things. Or rather, he did until he received an invitation at the age of fourteen to enroll in an Athens-based magic school of a less-than-formal nature organized—though sanctioned by the Greek ministry—and run by the same witch who initially discovered his magical talent. Having made a few well-timed financial decisions in the early 2000s, the Kanelli's allowed their son to attend the aforementioned school wherein the curriculum focused on a less practiced magic, elemental manipulation.

Upon turning eighteen, Maria and Alastair sent their son off to a muggle institution in the United States where he majored in theater. During his time in the US, he also spent time honing his magical abilities living a double life; one as a muggle where he studied theater and one as a wizard where he was in and out of dueling arenas. After graduating from college and after perfecting his apparition ability in countless duels, he returned to Greece where he—along with every other eligible male in the country—fulfilled his military commitments as an officer. In fact, he ended up staying in for five years before being recruited out of the muggle military and into the Greek ministry of magic.

In the ministry, he quickly distinguished himself as a first-class auror and an asset to the country at large. He now looks forward to a time when his home country does not bend the knee to a foreign, and distinctly French, force. Time will tell how he goes about addressing such a goal...

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Mother:
  Name: Maria Kanelli
  Age: 60
  Living or Deceased: Living
  Blood type or Species: Muggle
  Occupation: Retired

Father:
  Name: Alastair Kanelli
  Age: 60
  Living or Deceased: Living
  Blood type or Species: Muggle
  Occupation: Retired

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The Kanelli had never been particularly well off. The vineyard on which they lived had been passed down through the generation until it came to Alastair and his new wife Maria. That said, as all of Greece seemed to be collapsing in early-2000's financial crisis, Alastair made a few shrewd investments that made the family richer than it had ever been before. Thanks to this windfall the three members of the family are able to live comfortably for the remainder of their days if they so chose.

Perhaps the most interesting family dynamic in the Kanelli's household is Alexio's magical abilities. Though accepting of it, both Alexio's mother and father are reticent to applaud their son's magical nature. As a result, Alexio shies away from using magic in their presence. Indeed, this cloaked fear of magic his muggle parents exhibit has left the man to wonder if magic really ought to be revealed to the world at large.


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PostSubject: Re: Alexio Kanelli   Alexio Kanelli EmptySun Jun 23, 2019 11:12 pm

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Hi Gary,

Congrats on the new character! The admins have reviewed your profile, and we have the following points for you to expand on/correct:

1. You have noted that Alexio has a strength of elemental magic, but the only note of this in the rest of the profile is that of when he used it as a child. Elemental magic is not a common magical ability in the Harry Potter universe, and therefore further clarification would be welcome.

2. Appartition is known to be quite tiring, even to the most accomplished of wizards. Again, a little further clarification on the apparition based combat would be great.

3. There is no school for magic in Greece. European schools of choice would be: Hogwarts, Beauxbatons or Durmstrang. Given Alexio's capability with German, Durmstrang would be the most logical of choices. Durmstrang, however, does not admit Muggleborn students, and would start tuition at 11, not 14.

4. Greece is owned by the Clement family (speak to Azalea for more information) and therefore isn't completely under threat by anyone (in respect of your point of a robust force protecting it).

5. There are a couple of spelling mistakes in the application that need to be rectified.

6. Please complete the claims necessary of this app.

Once you've made those adjustments, please let us know!

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PostSubject: Re: Alexio Kanelli   Alexio Kanelli EmptyTue Jun 25, 2019 3:10 pm

Howdy,

I'll address your points in order, for the most part:

1. & 3. If acceptable, I have made it such that Alexio's education in magic is less than formal (ie non-institution based)

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Or rather, he did until he received an invitation at the age of fourteen to enroll in an Athens-based magic school of a less-than-formal nature organized—though sanctioned by the Greek ministry—and run by the same witch who initially discovered his magical talent. Having made a few well-timed financial decisions in the early 2000s, the Kanelli's allowed their son to attend the aforementioned school wherein the curriculum focused on a less practiced magic, elemental manipulation.

2. Expanded on his apparition abilities.

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During his time in the US, he also spent time honing his magical abilities living a double life; one as a muggle where he studied theater and one as a wizard where he was in and out of dueling arenas. After graduating from college and after perfecting his apparition ability in countless duels, he returned to Greece where he—along with every other eligible male in the country—fulfilled his military commitments as an officer.

Also mentioned that his physical stamina makes him particularly suited to this type of combat.

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- Apparition-based combat, if apparition is like driving a car, then Alexio is like a professional driver as a result of his time dueling in the States. He weaves the ability to move from location to location into his combat forms effortless thanks to his keen mind, quick wit, and excellent physical stamina maintained by his aforementioned like of physical exertion.

4. I'd argue that just because a country is under the protection of another country that they still might have a robust military force (ie South Korea and, yes, Japan). Nonetheless, I have removed that reference and replaced it with the following,

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In the ministry, he quickly distinguished himself as a first-class auror and an asset to the country at large. He now looks forward to a time when his home country does not bend the knee to a foreign, and distinctly French, force. Time will tell how he goes about addressing such a goal...

5. I think I've amended a few of these spelling errors, but please point any out I may have missed. One tends to go blind when editing their own writing, I've found.

6. As per the rules, I'll refrain from making my claims until the application itself is finished.
This has been explained to me by Aki/Azalea

Let me know what you think and thanks for taking the time to review the character.
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PostSubject: Re: Alexio Kanelli   Alexio Kanelli EmptyWed Jun 26, 2019 10:39 pm

Alright, nerf guns out, take two!

1. While a less than formal education is okay, we'd still like to see some detail of how the elemental magic came about and was perfected. We feel its a very complicated and unusual ability to be just thrown into the app. A little more explanation would be great

4. How about we level here? Greece in the game was under severe, crushing debt up until a few years ago when the Clements paid it off and in return ended up effectively owning all its assets. Feel free to use that as you will but our suggestion would be to outline how your character grew up in a country struggling amidst such financial turmoil and now, in return for the tentative peace, their military and other forces have either been disbanded or restructured with the French officials at the top. This might give your character more motivation to rebel, join the cause or form other opinions about the circumstances Greece finds itself in now.

Overall when we look at Alexio, we see someone who is very vastly overpowered without much explanation as to how it came about. While it is true that he has to be impressive due to his line of work, we feel that he also needs some weaknesses to balance him out. I would recommend adding at least two more weaknesses overall to this character profile just to make Alexio a more well rounded character.

Let us know when you've made the edits and we'll check back!
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